Monday, 21 November 2016

Planning: Shot List

SCENE 1

musical intro:(10sec)
1•Longshot- [artist sitting outside house (the walk out of your front door straight onto the street type) head in hands: frustrated. His clothes falling from above- this could be slow motion for better effect?](-*record 1x version where artist is still to allow slow motion to look better?)
-dolly moves forward-stops at a close up of his face-
2•(20SEC)Closeup of artists face for first line to be lip synched: "who says that I..." Artist looking straight into the camera) "...last one i'd ever get"
3•cut to midshot "i thought we had something worth forever.." Artist still keeps eye connection with the camera - starts roughly packing a few items into a backpack which has also fallen alongside the clothes

Starts getting up on "cause im stuck smoking on the rest of together" -to capture him getting up the camera will most likely have to move slightly backwards on the dolly again

Tracking shot-artist moving forward-"ive been getting high just to get by (dolly positioning changed tracks ____ horizontal rather than || vertical- camera swivelled on its axis to face artist)
"Ever since you left wrong turned right for me [artist questioning himself] now I can see tomorrow chilling across the street"

Cut to graffiti-bg-brayton mid shot "sometimes youve gotta"

Cut back to narrative-brayton--> from the back - we see him drop his bag (because he's all 'screw it') "JAYWALK"
**Alternatively he could've just clumped the clothes together and held them and now hes let go of all of them???which one??

For chorus shots of Brayton on SHOREDITCH graffiti background more art rather than spray letters

---SCENE 2

Cut to narrative-Brayton

tracking shot of Artist walking forward in location 2"It took me six whole months " {not lip synched} - he's starting to doubt himself as he sees other couples-
"Worth of blunts To get the taste of you.." Camera follows a couple walking towards the artist from a P.O.V shot - turns in one swift movement to Brayton (couple can be seen in the bg walking away) {itll be best if the actor is lip synching during this part so he's ready for when the camera meets him - should be at around "the taste of you off my tongue

"And it was hard to" Cut to Narrative-Brayton entering bar-pushing door- camera inside

maybe camera sweeps bar/ lingers on something in the settings of the bar
"Let go of my first love"= cut to mid shot narrative-Brayton sitting at bar
Close-up of him fiddling with his drink "im sorry if my pride and I" close up- puffs out air "were latched on too tightly"
"To what we were but you sent me flying"- shot of glass being slid away across the bar
"Tripping when you kicked me to the curb" shot of door from inside (light:dusk outside)

"Now ive been getting high just to get by"
"Ever since you left wrong turned right for me"
⁃ Shots of chorus-brayton for the 2nd chorus


Location:southbank pink lights
"Two steps forward and one step back"
"your still moving forward so dont look back"
"If you take two steps forward and one step back"
"You're still moving forward

Southbank skatepark:
(Greeted by mates-they pat him on the back-smiling-laughing)
"so you better not look back"
"You better Jaywalk"
--> LAST LONG CHORUS loops x2
Shots include:
-Brayton on southbank graffiti background lip synching
-lads skateboarding
-group shot:{laughing}

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