The Third Draft:
The journey from draft 2 to the third draft based on audience feedback:
The journey from draft 2 to the third draft based on audience feedback:
Key:
- Following audience feedback on the continuity of the video I had taken out the shot of the persona carrying the bag (previously at 1:09) because 2 shots before this the bag was dropped, in which case it made no sense if the he was carrying the bag again.
- Audiences also brought to my attention an out of time lip synch; however here this could not be fixed by editing so instead I had searched for a different take of the same scene(/lyrics) and found one from a side angle, presenting the profile of the actor, which adds to the variety of our shots and makes this particular sequence (location:the pink lights, part of song:bridge) more interesting.
- We had also recorded a second version of the penultimate chorus where we were short on lip-synching footage. We manipulated the lighting, making it a more golden tinge to show a slight contrast with the footage I planned to cut to, which hopefully added impact.
- To edit this newly recorded footage, mentioned above, I used precise-editing to cut to a similar shot of the actor but one where he's moving in to a slight lean forward as he sings the line 'ever since you left'.
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